Story Power Hour by Sue Brown-Moore

Get help with your manuscript at the Story Power Hour

Stuck on a story choice? Need a little help straightening out a plot snarl? Or just want to watch a developmental editor in action? 

Book a Story Power Hour with Sue Brown-Moore for your writing group or event.

Story Power Hour by Sue Brown-Moore

Get help with your manuscript at the Story Power Hour

Stuck on a story choice? Need a little help straightening out a plot snarl? Or just want to watch a developmental editor in action?

Book a Story Power Hour with Sue Brown-Moore for your fiction writing group or event.

I can't wait to personally troubleshoot your writers' work-in-progress story problems!

This session can flex between 60 and 90 minutes. It can be done in as few as 45 minutes, but I'd only be able to feature one hot seat participant. 

If you are a summit or conference organizer and would like to include this event as part of your lineup, fill out the form below (or contact Sue directly). 

For a ticketed event, I don't charge an additional fee outside of whatever honorarium or compensation you normally offer your speakers.

If you would like to set up a Story Power Hour as a standalone session for your writing group, the fee is $300 USD.

Story Power Hour by Sue Brown-Moore

Working with a developmental editor can elevate your stories (and storytelling skills) to a whole new level. But what if you need help before the story is finished? 

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How should my story end?

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Why does the middle feel so meh?

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What if I make the wrong decisions and have to rewrite the whole thing?

Sometimes the most stressful story problems can have simple answers. Knowing what choices to make is all about asking yourself the right questions. 

During this 60-minute working session, professional storysmith Sue Brown-Moore will take turns consulting one-on-one with 2-3 authors to shape up their current work-in-progress or brainstorm a new story idea. Each 15-20 minute consultation will be visible to all attendees, so even if you don’t get a turn in the hot seat, you can still take away valuable insight to power up your own working draft.

Specific details on how to volunteer to be in the hot seat will be provided to registered attendees in the days preceding our Story Power Hour! This event cannot be recorded unless all featured writers consent in writing in advance, so I recommend encouraging people to attend live.

Who it's best for

I work exclusively with authors of character-driven fiction, and my super-niche area of expertise is romantic fiction, so I prefer to work on romance stories during a hot seat. 

However, if your group (or event) does not have any romance writers who are willing to be featured, my techniques work equally well for stories about hero characters who become a better, happier version of themself through their on-page conflicts and decisions. 

A hot seat is not appropriate for plot-driven stories where the focus is more on action and adventure than personal growth.  

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Troubleshooting story problems is one of my favorite parts of being a developmental editor. And the Story Power Hour is perfect for authors who want to stop wasting time spinning their storytelling wheels and cut right to the heart of what's holding their story back. 

Here's a peek at some of the Aha! Moments authors often take away from these hot seat sessions:

  • Realizing the specific part of the story that is causing a writing block
  • Clarifying why the GMCs aren't working (and how to start fixing them)
  • Identifying where the author's bias might be bleeding into character work
  • Figuring out what their hero needs to do (instead of what they thought they wanted to do)
  • Unearthing a character's truest fear (by digging into their most relevant whys)

I will also answer your general editing and storycraft questions during the final 15 minutes of the session, so come prepared to take notes and ask questions!

All your questions challenge me to think more deeply than I've ever done with my stories. It's daunting and exciting at the same time.

"All your questions challenge me to think more deeply than I've ever done with my stories. It's daunting and exciting at the same time."

What to expect at this special event

A community event

Writing is a solitary profession, so sharing space with the people like you, who get you, is so important to our mental and emotional health as creatives. 


Show up to be featured, or show up to support your peers. But no matter which you choose, you'll walk away feeling like you're part of a bigger community.

Troubleshoot your WIP live

2-3 brave writers will be selected to sit in the "hot seat" and get my personal help to solve a problem with your work-in-progress. 


After the Story Power Hour, I'll take general questions about editing and give any other unique insights that my experience as a revision specialist and coach can provide. 

Unique writing inspiration 

Sometimes Aha! Moments happen when you least expect them, even when you're thinking about someone else's story. 


Even though only a few people will get the chance to be in the hot seat and get my personal feedback, attendees of my previous Story Power Hour event raved about how much watching me work with other people helped them solve their own problems

Story Power Hour by Sue Brown-Moore

A special treat for your attendees

Every attendee will receive a take-home list of questions you can ask yourself to diagnose your own work, using the same technique I do during the session itself.

Story Power Hour by Sue Brown-Moore

Don't skip the Story Power Hour if you...

  • Are stuck on a story (and have no idea how to move forward)
  • Know that something is "not right" about your story (but are stumped about how to fix it)
  • Keep rewriting the same chapters, hoping the story gets better with this editing pass
  • Learn best by watching other people troubleshoot their own problems
  • Have a burning question about editing but no idea who (and how) to ask
  • Know you should work with an editor but don't know what a developmental editor actually does
  • Want to meet other like-minded writers and foster friendships within your fiction genre writing niche

Got questions? Check out the FAQ below.

What is a Story Power Hour "hot seat" and why are they so powerful?

It's my version of a plot-doctor session. In the 15-20 minute version for our Story Power Hour session, I will focus on one story-blocking problem that each author is struggling with. "Hot seat" just means that I'm talking one-on-one with you, but other people get to watch and listen.

During our time together, I'll ask you to briefly recap the story problem you're having. Then I'll start asking you questions to pinpoint the root of that problem. My goal is to give each hot seat participant a new path forward and get "unstuck" in your writing process. 

Think of this not as solving the problem for you, but rather helping you find the solution that is right for the story and your writing style. Sometimes my questions trigger an immediate realization of what is wrong or missing, and sometimes we uncover larger (more nebulous) problems that may require significant revisions.

A hot seat is not a quick-fix magic wand, but it is a great way to fast track identifying the problems that are holding you back from writing the story that is in your heart. And just watching a session like this can light up your own creativity and critical thinking, so don't miss this opportunity for extra story inspiration!

Who gets to be in the hot seat to benefit from the Story Consult?

Everyone who watches will benefit, guaranteed. One of my special skills is being able to spot nuanced story problems and drill down into what’s causing them in minutes. I do this by asking questions designed to dig deeper and arrow right to the root of a symptom. Watching this process intuitively teaches you how to do this same sort of analysis in your work.

You’ll also leave the session with a quick list of story-diagnosis questions that you can reference when you get home.

To be sure I can give you the best possible demonstration, I prefer to choose the hot seats in advance. I specialize in character-driven, HEA-guaranteed romantic fiction, so where possible, these are the stories I’ll choose to focus on. I also know from a decade of doing this kind of work that there are some story problems that can’t be solved in a 15-minute window, so I’ll take the complexity of the submitted story problems into account too.

Are the hot seats pre-scripted?

Nope! And, let me tell you, even though I've done sessions like these for years, every hot seat is different.

I will know the general problems I'll be working with in advance and have chosen hot seat participants that I believe I can truly help in a 15-20 minute session.

But sometimes I need to do some exploration before we get to the heart of the writer's problem, so please be patient with us. Trouble discovery can be a winding path (but is always super interesting to watch!).

How do I apply for a hot seat?

Details and instructions will be sent out to registered event attendees a few days before our scheduled session, so be sure you're paying attention to your event's communication channels or you might miss the instructions email. 

I get nervous speaking in public. Is a hot seat right for me?

That's a tough question, and only you can answer it. That said, I want you to know that my approach to troubleshooting a story focuses on the story and not you as a writer. All writers struggle with a story at some point in their career, so there's no shame in getting help. And when I ask questions, I dig into the heart of the characters themselves, because that is where the power of the story lives.

So if you get nervous being in the spotlight but want to overcome this fear, doing a 15-minute hot seat consult can be a safe, nurturing way to get started. But if the thought of having to think on the spot in front of other people paralyzes you, a hot seat may not be a good fit.

And sometimes you can have Aha! Moments about troubleshooting your own story just by watching someone else be in the hot seat. There's something for everyone at this event, so don't be afraid to show up live, even if it's just to watch and learn. 

I don't write romance. Should I still come?

Of course! While my work is rooted in the genre of romantic fiction, the style of story troubleshooting work I do is relevant to nearly any character-driven genre.

So if romance books are not your thing, but you write stories about heroes who become better versions of themselves through their choices and struggles in the book, most of my techniques will also work for you.

That said, I work best with authors of romantic fiction in a 1:1 capacity, so I prefer to feature romance stories during a hot seat. 

However, if your group (or event) does not have any romance writers who are willing to be featured, my techniques work equally well for stories about hero characters who become a better, happier version of themself through their on-page conflicts and decisions. 

A hot seat is not appropriate for plot-driven stories where the focus is more on external elements (like action and adventure) than personal growth.  

But even if you don't write character-driven fiction stories, you can still learn a lot from coming. So yes, come anyway!

Will I know in advance if I've been chosen for a hot seat?

Yes! Because some story problems may be too complex to troubleshoot in only 15 minutes, I will prescreen the hot seat applications and choose the ones that are best suited for this shorter format. You will know by at least the evening before our session if you have been chosen.

You will need to attend live in order to participate, so please don't apply if you don't plan to attend.

[For online events] Do I have to be on video to ask a question during the final 15 minutes (after the hot seats)?

Nope! My fellow introverts, you can breathe easy.

No video required. And no voice either! I'll take questions through the chat, if one is available, or from a moderator curating the questions list. Unless you choose to turn on your video and speak up intentionally, you will not have to be on camera or speak publicly.

The only people who have to be on camera or speaking over an open mic will be me, the hot seat participants, and the group moderator. Ideally, to keep the event moving along smoothly, all questions will be routed through a Q&A section of the online space.

For in-person events, simply stick around until the last 15 minutes if you have questions and raise your hand when I open up Q&A.  

Why do you recommend the session is NOT recorded?

The kind of work I do during a hot seat is a vulnerable process that often digs deep into the author's personal creativity, and most participants do not want that experience available for public viewing later.

This event should not be recorded unless all featured writers consent in writing in advance, so I recommend encouraging people to attend live.

I can't attend live. Why is there no replay?

Participating in a hot seat event like this can be an extremely vulnerable discovery process, and it requires the participants to willingly open themselves up for public criticism and feedback. If you've ever had a developmental edit, you know how stressful discovery questions can be even in a private setting, so imagine baring your soul for not just your writing friends, but strangers you're meeting for the first time. 

How long does the Story Power Hour last?

The full session time can be anywhere between 60 and 90 minutes. Talk to me about the unique session needs for your event, and I'll adjust my format to fit.

In general, I'll do a quick intro of myself (<5 minutes), then we'll spend 15-20 minutes on each of the hot seats (2-3 total, time dependent). In the remaining time, I'll answer any other questions about my unique techniques, developmental editing, etc.

I have a different question.

If you have a general question about the session or want to schedule something, email my team at hi@suebrownmoore.com 

If you're ready to set up your session and lock in the date for your group's Story Power Hour, fill out the form below and I'll be back in touch soon with next steps.

about Your Speaker

Hi, I'm Sue!

I'm passionate about helping fiction writers craft unforgettable characters. As a book revision coach, I specialize in guiding authors through the process of creating compelling character-driven stories. My approach focuses on character transformation, breaking away from traditional plot-first methods to help you build characters that truly resonate with readers.

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Over the years, I've had the joy of working with many talented writers, helping them nurture their unique voices and bring their characters to life. While I've been fortunate to receive recognition in the publishing industry, what really drives me is seeing writers like you achieve your own professional "Happily Ever Afters." I'd be thrilled to join you on your journey to creating characters that linger in readers' hearts long after they've turned the last page.

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A student in Learn to Line Edit Like a Pro

Sue Brown-Moore is akin to having a favorite author. I intend to take every class she puts together because I've done several, and I've never been disappointed. She's my one-click buy for author tools.

Orlando DeVito Writer

A wonderful talent for explaining

I have been following your teachings for some time now, and you never fail to amaze. You have a wonderful talent for explaining what many would consider obscure.

Your ideas are clear and simple. I truly believe now (after trying to write by beat) that knowing what the Root Fear is absolutely key since it is the engine behind the character driven plot/story.

A student in How To Pre-Edit Your manuscript

I greatly appreciate your teaching -- style and content. I've read many of your articles / emails over the last 2 or 3 years.

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Janine Williams Writer

Sue turns on the 'aha' lights and inspires confidence

Sue turns on the 'aha' lights and inspires confidence by outlining simple but vital steps to writing a story that will move readers' hearts.

I really like how you explain it so easily.

A student in How To Pre-Edit Your manuscript

I like Sue's teaching style and the vast amount of resources she makes available on her website.

Email me to set up your event's Story Power Hour

Drop me an email to discuss your event date and details. Prices and the listings of other available workshops and speaking topics can be found here, on my Workshops page. I update this periodically, so even if you viewed it previously, check it again to see what I'm currently offering. 

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Sue pushes me to write better and better novels. She’s a fantastic editor. I don’t know how long it would’ve taken me to sharpen up my game without her, and I really don’t want to speculate on that either. Thank you, Sue!

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JS Harker

Urban Fantasy Romance writer

First, I want to say you are a phenomenal speaker and teacher. I watched your "Liar, Liar, Plot on Fire: A 5-question story diagnosis technique" webinar back in March and loved it. So of course I'm excited by the prospect of even more of your content.

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Coryanne Hicks

Ghostwriter / fiction writer

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