
Map out the 4 layers of key moments in your story
(without the overwhelm of plotting)
When you write moment to moment, you can stop stressing about story details before they matter and focus on writing a story that sounds uniquely like you.
Join Sue Brown-Moore on March 27th for this special live workshop.

Map out the 4 layers of key moments in your manuscript
(without the overwhelm of plotting)
When you write moment to moment, you can stop stressing about story details before they matter and focus on writing a story that sounds uniquely like you.
Join Sue Brown-Moore on March 27th for this special live workshop.
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[00:00:04] If you've ever finished your fourth draft of a story and thought, "Why does this still feel off?" My Cake, Not Chaos workshop is for you.
[00:00:14] Because most writers assume that the problem is their story or their talent. But in my decade of experience as a developmental editor and writing coach, I've found that it's usually not the story idea that's broken. It's the structure underneath, the way it's put together, that doesn't support how the author naturally writes.
[00:00:33] That's what Cake Not Chaos is designed to fix.
[00:00:37] Hello, hello. My name is Sue Brown-Moore, and I specialize in helping writers diagnose and fix story problems. Think of me as a plot doctor with a velvet scalpel. Because what I help you do is more than just find a story problem. I guide you through how to fix it in a way that is true to you and your author brand and voice.
[00:01:00] Because there is no one-size-fits-all-problems template in writing fiction, especially in writing romantic fiction. That is what I use for the majority of the examples in this workshop. In Cake, Not Chaos, I teach a framework called the Moment to Moment Method, built around what I call the 4-Part Story Beat Stack.
[00:01:23] It layers together the four core elements that drive every romance story. Your hero's growth arcs, your primary trope beats, your key genre beats, and the genre plot structure itself. When you stack those four layers in the right order for your unique storytelling voice, you get something that's flexible visual, and deeply intuitive.
[00:01:48] A story map that shows your entire book's emotional flow at a glance. So instead of juggling spreadsheets or color-coded beat sheets, writers in this session will learn to design a story structure that supports your voice, never stifles it.
[00:02:05] The Moment To Moment Method I teach in Cake, Not Chaos helps authors spot pacing gaps, uneven arcs, even brand misalignments before you've written 90,000 words.
[00:02:19] This is a hands-on working session, so it's not just theory. Attendees will actually start building your own beat stack during the workshop itself, using guided writing sprints in real time. We will go layer by layer together. And by the end of the hour, each writer will have a starting foundation for your own personal customized framework that you can take home and finish mapping in the take-home workbook.
[00:02:45] That means you're gonna walk out of this room not only understanding why your structure works, but how to repeat that structure and format for every future book you write or revise. So that they all sound just like you, and they all work the way you want them to work.
[00:03:03] I often hear from writers in my workshops and programs that the intuitive storytelling frameworks I use are the one thing that helps them go from confused to "Aah, aha, yes!" They're finally free to write with clarity, heart, and confidence, instead of second-guessing every choice.
[00:03:22] This session is built for intermediate to advanced writers who already know their tropes and scene craft, but want a cleaner, more emotionally grounded process for planning and drafting.
[00:03:34] That's what makes Cake, Not Chaos so special. It bridges two worlds: the analytical clarity of structure and the emotional intelligence of romance writing. Because when story structure supports emotion, when all four story layers align, you don't end up in chaos.
[00:03:55] You end up with a cake that, in the words of Dame Prue Leith, is worth the calories. Layered, satisfying, and unmistakably yours.
Creating stories that resonate emotionally isn't about grand gestures or dramatic plot twists. It's about writing from a place of authenticity and vulnerability, allowing your characters to feel as real to readers as they do to you.
In this insightful 60-minute workshop, we'll explore how to tap into your own emotions and experiences to craft stories that genuinely connect with readers.
I’ll share the Moment To Moment Method technique so you can:
This session is perfect for you if…
Join development editor and romance author coach Sue Brown-Moore and discover how writing from the heart can transform your storytelling and leave readers swooning for more, long after the final page.
Note: This session uses romantic fiction as its example, but the technique works for nearly all character-driven fiction genres.
What's included
All workshop attendees will receive the companion pdf workbook for this training, which walks through each of the four layers of moment-to-moment storytelling and includes my example from the presentation.

You'll also get access to a private replay of the live workshop recording. Watch and re-watch it until you've nailed your own personal "layer cake" style.

Ticket & Event Details
Here's when the workshop will take place, where you'll show up to attend live, replay details, and the ticket cost. If you have more questions, skip down to the FAQ section below.
Date: Friday, March 27, 2026
Time: 12:00 pm Mountain Time (see your time zone equivalent here)
Where: Airmeet (link will be sent after registration)
Replay: Watch the recording for 5 days (through March 31st)
Ticket cost: $37 USD
Rgistration is closed.
Registration closes at 8pm Mountain time on Thursday, March 26.
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The concepts you taught helped me shape character arcs in ways that truly transformed my writing.
Kay Freeman, romance author
(Kay learned the 2023 original version of the Moment To Moment Method in my private group—I've refined it since then. And in 2025, she won a Stiletto award!)

"The concepts you taught helped me shape character arcs in ways that truly transformed my writing."
Kay Freeman, romance author
(Kay learned the 2023 original version of the Moment To Moment Method in my private group—I've refined it since then. And in 2025? She won a Stiletto award!)
Workshop Details
The Moment To Moment Method: Your 4-Part Story Beats Stack
Out with the beat sheets, in with beat layer maps.
Plotting spreadsheets can get big fast, and every choice starts to feel like doing math. Prescriptive beat sheets slow you down and often suppress your unique author brand voice. Sometimes your story needs to break a rule on purpose—and you should know exactly when and why to do it.
In this session, Sue Brown-Moore teaches how to map out the four layers of beats that shape your story’s framework, then stack them into a moment-to-moment timeline that shows the story’s emotional flow and structure at a glance. You’ll learn how this method pinpoints pacing gaps, weak arcs, and even brand misalignments before you draft a single scene.
By the end of this working session, you’ll have a clear, repeatable story-framing process you can use every time you start a new manuscript (or want to revise one). If you’ve ever wanted to “write from the heart” without ending up in a multi-revision spiral, this framework makes it simple.

Included in the session:
Because everyone learns differently.
Got questions? Check out the FAQ below.
Of course! While my work is rooted in the genre of romantic fiction, the style of story troubleshooting work I do is relevant to nearly any character-driven genre.
So if romance books are not your thing, but you write stories about heroes who become better versions of themselves through their choices and struggles in the book, most of my techniques will also work for you.
That said, I work best with authors of romantic fiction in a 1:1 capacity, so I prefer to feature romance stories during a hot seat (if we have time to do any).
But even if you don't write character-driven fiction stories, you can still learn a lot from coming. So yes, come anyway!
The full session time can be anywhere between 60 and 90 minutes.
The teaching portion of the workshop, where I walk you through the layer-cake technique and guide you through some real-time exercises, usually takes around 45 minutes.
We also do a Q&A at the end and, if there's time, I'll do a quick hot seat troubleshooting session of one or two attendees exercises.
Yes! The workbook is professionally formatted and beautifully designed. It's worth printing out. And it has a recap of everything I teach during the workshop, plus some extra exercises and resources.
Currently, the workbook is only available in pdf format.
Yes! You'll have through the end of the month (March 31) to watch the recording of the live workshop, so about 5 days. Scroll up to the event details to verify the replay expiration date.
You'll also have the opportunity to extend your access indefinitely, and I'll give more details about that during the workshop.
You won't be able to download the video, but you will have access to a limited-time replay of the recording. Scroll up to the event details to verify the replay expiration date.
For this workshop, no. The price is fairly low, and handling recurring payments adds a lot of extra overhead I'd rather not deal with. I usually only offer split-pay options for my programs that are over $150 USD.
If you have a general question about the session or have a technical problem with downloading the workbook or getting my update emails, contact my team at hi@suebrownmoore.com
If you would like to book me to present this workshop to your writing group, go here.
about Your Speaker

I'm passionate about helping fiction writers craft unforgettable characters. As a book revision coach, I specialize in guiding authors through the process of creating compelling character-driven stories. My approach focuses on character transformation, breaking away from traditional plot-first methods to help you build characters that truly resonate with readers.

Over the years, I've had the joy of working with many talented writers, helping them nurture their unique voices and bring their characters to life. While I've been fortunate to receive recognition in the publishing industry, what really drives me is seeing writers like you achieve your own professional "Happily Ever Afters." I'd be thrilled to join you on your journey to creating characters that linger in readers' hearts long after they've turned the last page.
My one-click buy for author tools
A student in Learn to Line Edit Like a Pro
Sue Brown-Moore is akin to having a favorite author. I intend to take every class she puts together because I've done several, and I've never been disappointed. She's my one-click buy for author tools.
Orlando DeVito | Writer
A wonderful talent for explaining
I have been following your teachings for some time now, and you never fail to amaze. You have a wonderful talent for explaining what many would consider obscure.
Your ideas are clear and simple. I truly believe now (after trying to write by beat) that knowing what the Root Fear is absolutely key since it is the engine behind the character driven plot/story.
A student in How To Pre-Edit Your manuscript
I greatly appreciate your teaching -- style and content. I've read many of your articles / emails over the last 2 or 3 years.
Leslie Rigg, a student in How to Build Breakthrough Backstories
Janine Williams | Writer
Sue turns on the 'aha' lights and inspires confidence
Sue turns on the 'aha' lights and inspires confidence by outlining simple but vital steps to writing a story that will move readers' hearts.
I really like how you explain it so easily.
A student in How To Pre-Edit Your manuscript
I like Sue's teaching style and the vast amount of resources she makes available on her website.
Sue pushes me to write better and better novels. She’s a fantastic editor. I don’t know how long it would’ve taken me to sharpen up my game without her, and I really don’t want to speculate on that either. Thank you, Sue!

JS Harker
Urban Fantasy Romance writer
First, I want to say you are a phenomenal speaker and teacher. I watched your "Liar, Liar, Plot on Fire: A 5-question story diagnosis technique" webinar back in March and loved it. So of course I'm excited by the prospect of even more of your content.

Coryanne Hicks
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