Set up the heart of your story in just 8 scenes

For experienced writers of character-driven fiction stories who want to write from scene to scene without stressing about heavy plotting or exhausting full-story revisions. 

Give your writing group or event a unique framework for mapping out key scenes in their manuscript without exhaustive plotting

In this 90-minute workshop, I teach my 8-Scene Story Setup method so you can learn how to draft a tight, cohesive character growth arc in the fewest rewrites. I don't sell this as an on-demand (self-paced) workshop in my online university, so it'll be a treat for your event, even if your writers are already one of my students!

Book me as a speaker at your next meeting, workshop, retreat, or summit. More info here about other workshops I offer (click to browse). Or contact me below to set up a date.

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Drafting a tight, cohesive character arc doesn't have to be a struggle. Join me, professional development editor Sue Brown-Moore, in this 90-minute workshop on The 8-Scene Story Setup to learn the shortcut framework that will simplify your plotting process so you can sidestep the most time-consuming plotting pitfalls

Throughout our 90 minutes together, I'll break down the strategic story structure, character traits, and scene flow that anchor your story’s plot using a deconstructed hero example from the TV show Bridgerton Season 3.

Writers will have time to brainstorm their own 8 scenes as we work, and I'll answer questions after each sprint so attendees feel confident using this unique story-planning technique at home to make writing complex, nuanced stories feel approachable.

This session is perfect for fiction writers who:

  • Have no trouble typing “The End “ on a manuscript but struggle with constantly rewriting and tweaking it afterwards
  • Tend to get mired in the muddy, messy, or missing middle of the story
  • Write lackluster end-of-story climax sequences and can't figure out why
  • End up writing a totally different story than you set out to (and really wish you could stick to a plan)
  • Want to write gripping stories about people who become better versions of themselves

The 8-Scene Story Setup will guide your hero through their full Transformation Growth Arc so you can spotlight every powerful moment in their on-page character journey.

For writers who prefer to develop your stories naturally (not rigidly), the 8-Scene Story Setup is a way to sanity-check your first draft so you can commit to the plot's key scenes without stressing the eff out. Find out what a professional storysmith looks for in a story audit so your attendees can send their manuscript off for critiques and edits with confidence.

Book The 8-Scene Story Setup workshop for your writing group or event to learn which parts of your hero's journey matter most and how to plan your story around them

Workbook for the 8-Scene Story Setup by Sue Brown-Moore

All workshop attendees will receive the companion workbook for this training, which walks through my example from the presentation and has space for the writer to map out their own 8-Scene Story Setup at home.  

Speaker's Fee & Details

This is a 90-minute session minimum. It will not fit into a smaller time slot, but it can be extended to 2 hours if needed. 

If you are a summit or conference organizer and would like to include this event as part of your lineup, fill out the form below (or contact Sue directly). 

For a ticketed event, I don't charge an additional fee outside of whatever honorarium or compensation you normally offer your speakers.

If you would like to book The 8-Scene Story Setup as a standalone session for your writing group, contact me for the current fee. I'm flexible with speaking fees when I can share my audience with your group.

about Your Speaker

Hi, I'm Sue!

I'm passionate about helping fiction writers craft unforgettable characters. As a book revision coach, I specialize in guiding authors through the process of creating compelling character-driven stories. My approach focuses on character transformation, breaking away from traditional plot-first methods to help you build characters that truly resonate with readers.

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Over the years, I've had the joy of working with many talented writers, helping them nurture their unique voices and bring their characters to life. While I've been fortunate to receive recognition in the publishing industry, what really drives me is seeing writers like you achieve your own professional "Happily Ever Afters." I'd be thrilled to join you on your journey to creating characters that linger in readers' hearts long after they've turned the last page.

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202 Las Vegas Writers Conference in-person faculty (Sue Brown-Moore)
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A student in Learn to Line Edit Like a Pro

Sue Brown-Moore is akin to having a favorite author. I intend to take every class she puts together because I've done several, and I've never been disappointed. She's my one-click buy for author tools.

Orlando DeVito Writer

A wonderful talent for explaining

I have been following your teachings for some time now, and you never fail to amaze. You have a wonderful talent for explaining what many would consider obscure.

Your ideas are clear and simple. I truly believe now (after trying to write by beat) that knowing what the Root Fear is absolutely key since it is the engine behind the character driven plot/story.

A student in How To Pre-Edit Your manuscript

I greatly appreciate your teaching -- style and content. I've read many of your articles / emails over the last 2 or 3 years.

Leslie Rigg, a student in How to Build Breakthrough Backstories

Janine Williams Writer

Sue turns on the 'aha' lights and inspires confidence

Sue turns on the 'aha' lights and inspires confidence by outlining simple but vital steps to writing a story that will move readers' hearts.

I really like how you explain it so easily.

A student in How To Pre-Edit Your manuscript

I like Sue's teaching style and the vast amount of resources she makes available on her website.

Email me to set up your event's 8-Scene Story Setup workshop

Drop me an email to discuss your workshop date and details. Details about other available workshops and speaking topics can be found here, on my Workshops page. I update this periodically, so even if you viewed it previously, check it again to see what I'm currently offering. 

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Sue pushes me to write better and better novels. She’s a fantastic editor. I don’t know how long it would’ve taken me to sharpen up my game without her, and I really don’t want to speculate on that either. Thank you, Sue!

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JS Harker

Urban Fantasy Romance writer

First, I want to say you are a phenomenal speaker and teacher. I watched your "Liar, Liar, Plot on Fire: A 5-question story diagnosis technique" webinar back in March and loved it. So of course I'm excited by the prospect of even more of your content.

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Coryanne Hicks

Ghostwriter / fiction writer

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