Start drafting intuitively.
(Without pantsing yourself into a corner.)
In this 4.5-hour masterclass workshop, developmental editor Sue Brown-Moore will teach you how to cut straight to the heart of your best story with a mad-lib-style mini-game and five deep-dive questions.
This technique will expose problems with a story before it’s written. The Story Snapshot Method is a powerhouse tool for pantsers and plotters alike.
Perfect for romance writers. (But it's not just for romance writers!)
Here’s what people are saying about this workshop:
Simple, quick, and buildable
"I've done tons of different GMC and plotting worksheets, and the time investment is huge. What I liked most about the strategy was that it was simple and quick, and I ended with a buildable foundation."
Victoria Elliot
Romance writer
Cut to the chase
"I did my characters for book 3 and I have a great start that probably would have taken me weeks to develop, but the questions in your workbook helped really cut to the chase and get them fleshed out."
Tai James
Sci-Fi Romance author
Trouble spots revealed
"I realized during the madlib template that there's a section of my story that doesn't quite fit. Right in the middle, too. Using the template, I'm going to explore other ways to express the opportunity circumstances/decision."
CP Rider
Author of romantic urban fantasy
what you get
Here’s what you’ll learn in The Story Snapshot Method masterclass workshop!
This 4.5-hour online workshop with me, developmental editor & fiction revision specialist Sue Brown-Moore, will teach you how to use the Story Snapshot method to consistently plan your hero's key plot points for a strong first draft.
Follow along as I deconstruct a hero character journey from the movie The Proposal. Then dive into transforming your own work-in-progress through a series of fast-paced working sprints, which explore five thought-provoking questions that dig deep into your character’s psyche.
My unique method cuts through the monotony and confusion of traditional Goal, Motivation, and Conflict techniques with a madlib-style mini-game that will reveal the unique heart of your story.
The Story Snapshot Method exposes problems with a story before it’s written, making this technique a powerhouse tool for pantsers and plotters alike.
With your enrollment, you'll receive a comprehensive, in-depth workbook that can be reused for every new story draft. So print out your workbook in advance, and be ready to think fast, work hard, and transform your story!
The fast pace of this workshop leaves no time for overthinking.
"Because I had to think quick and go with the first thing that popped into my head, the brainstorming exercises allowed me to access ideas and connections my brain hadn't previously made."
Learn how to tap into your hidden story potential and bust through writing blocks.
Nailing the root of your characters' deepest fears is easier than you think.
"Going over all the things the character is afraid of, but focusing in on the 'true fear' was an ah-ha moment for me."
Learn how to identify and harness your heroes' fears so that you can write stories that resonate.
Targeted workbook exercises reveal unique story possibilities.
"The section on the Opportunity Decision helped me figure out a nagging problem I've been having with the interaction between the two main characters"
Learn how to recognize moments of opportunity for better character synergy and conflict.

What to expect
This workshop has three distinct phases that build upon one another and synergize with an author's existing understanding of character-arc mechanics, making the Story Snapshot Method a seamless fit for writers of all experience levels.
1
Slides-guided presentation
This is not a read-from-the-slides style of presentation. My synergistic teaching approach is designed to keep you engaged and in the creative zone as the workshop progresses through each phase of building your Story Snapshot.
2
Discovery workbook exercises
The Story Snapshot Method workbook is comprehensive. During the workshop's timed exercises, I lead you through a fast-paced gauntlet of story discovery that fills in an authentic hero Line Lib template.
My techniques are clearly illustrated in the companion workbook, and all of the on-slide examples are broken down in detail for quick reference and deeper study. The Story Snapshot workbook can be reused over and over, guiding you deeper into your own character discovery process with each new manuscript draft or revision.
3
Learn by watching a Hot Seat
Learning from example is just as effective as from a textbook, so I work with one lucky live-workshop attendee at the end of the recording to dig deeper into a real Story Snapshot.
During this one-on-one coaching hot seat, you'll get a glimpse of behind-the-scenes developmental editing techniques you can apply to your own WIPs.
4
Real (student) Questions & Answers
It's important for every participant to leave the workshop feeling confident and inspired, so getting timely answers is a must. In the video, I address the most common road-blocking questions.
But if you still need help with understanding the technique at the end of your workshop, simply leave a comment on the course lesson. I'll follow up with a written or recorded answer to help get you unstuck!

Draft your Story Snapshot in as little as 1 hour of brainstorming time. Then turn your character's story action statement into a scene framework that anchors the story's plot.
Learn my Story Discovery Funnel, a unique approach to ideating (& sanity checking) your story that zeroes in on exactly what transformation your hero needs to take.
Targeted character brainstorming exercises. Reveal the story pillars of your hero's emotional needs in a set of efficient writing sprints that expose their strengths and weaknesses.
Deep-dive into the heart of your story with 5 character-centric questions that reveal the milestone scenes that frame the hero's journey within your story's plot.
A madlib-style template that will simplify your story planning and shine a light on where to invest your time, while also exposing potential problems with your story before you write it.
50+ workbook pages of guided, in-depth instruction that not only explain the Story Snapshot Method (so you can refresh your memory later) but prompt you for meaningful story decisions that lead to fewer rewrites.
A digital smart workbook that remembers your brainstorming answers (so you only have to enter them once!) and spits out your Line Lib at the end of the workshop. This is a BRAND NEW addition to the workshop—tested by my Story Sorcery Intensive authors—that saves you a ton of time and gets you to your best Story Snapshot faster.
Ongoing, replayable access to the live recorded workshop that guides you through every brainstorming sprint with empathy and warmth. You also get a front row seat to a real Hot Seat, where I troubleshoot an author's Story Snapshot for a connected series.
Here’s what stood out for previous students...





I help fiction writers craft stories your readers will remember forever. My revision techniques are based in the study of human psychology and harness the power of transformative emotions.
This workshop was created to help the fiction writers I work with "borrow my brain" so you can write better stories faster and with more confidence.
I can't wait to show you how to map out your hero's unique journey so you can spotlight what makes their story so compelling.











All prices are in US dollars.
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Still have a question?
Read on!
If you are a fiction writer who focuses on character-driven plots in your stories, this workshop will guide you in making strategic hero growth arc choices that tie into key plot moments.
This is a true masterclass, not the popularized fluffy kind that many book coaches offer for free (where you learn just enough to need more, so they can upsell you something super expensive).
My Story Snapshot Method workshop is detailed and in-depth, and it will probably strain your brain (in the best way). So you should already know the basics of writing (and finishing) a manuscript. If you are brand new to writing—or want help writing either plot-driven fiction or any kind of non-fiction—this workshop may not be what you need.
This workshop is a digital product that lives inside my online university and has downloadable files. I have a general no-refunds policy for this type of program.
If you're not sure it will be right for you, email my team at hi@suebrownmoore.com and we'll help you decide. (But keep in mind that we try to observe moderate weekday working hours and may not be able to respond to your email before any limited-time offers expire.)
Not for this special, deeply discounted enrollment price. I do offer 2-month and 3-month split-pay options on the full $347 price.
The workshop steps you through the Story Snapshot Method technique, so the first time you watch it, you'll need the full workshop time to learn HOW to map out the framework. But the total amount of working time inside the workshop—the parts where you brainstorm and map out your hero's growth arc—is around 60 minutes.
As you become more experienced with the technique, you may be able to finish all the exercises in less than 60 minutes. One hour is the goal, but it's okay to give yourself some extra time if that's how your brain works best.
Regardless, this technique has been proven to decrease story planning time and minimize heavy manuscript rewrites.
As long as this program lives in my online university, you can log in and access it. Some people call this "lifetime" access, but I find that confusing. Whose lifetime? Mine? Yours? Instead of saying "for the lifetime of the course", I just say ongoing access. (I currently have no future plans to retire this program.)
When I first launched this workshop as an on-demand course, I sold it with a 1-year time limit for viewing access. But after being on the student side of a few courses like that, I decided I wanted to just make it always available. Once you purchase your enrollment, it is yours. No expiration. No renewals.
(If you previously purchased this on-demand course—NOT the live version this course was created from, that was a separate one-time workshop—and your access has expired, email hi@suebrownmoore.com and we will get your access reconnected!)
This workshop is my unique signature approach to story planning and revision. It is built on years' worth of my personal editorial insight, brainstorming, planning, and revision experience.
I truly believe that this workshop is TRANSFORMATIONAL for character-driven fiction writers of intermediate+ level. For the long-term value and confidence this workshop builds, $347 is a fair price. You will likely revisit the recordings over and over as you learn and practice the techniques I teach inside.
I charge significantly more (4-figures) to run it for private groups. So this on-demand version is the next best thing, and is far more economical.
The Story Snapshot is a short, high-level description of the starting and ending point in your hero's growth journey. It is rooted in the hero's psychological growth as a person.
By understanding what mindset your hero begins their story with and identifying what mindset SHIFT you want them to achieve by the story's end, you can confidently map out the middle of their transformation in the plot.
Liar, Liar is a revision tool that introduces the most important Character Core Values which drive your hero's story. While it can help you plan your story, its real strength is in guiding you through spot checking for critical plot problems in an existing manuscript.
The Story Snapshot Method teaches you the framework for how to plan your hero's growth arc using those (and more) CCVs. and it empowers you to write a cleaner first draft by working from a transformative, intuitive drafting framework.
Where Liar, Liar, Plot on Fire is an excellent introduction to my unique approach to storycraft, the Story Snapshot Method leans into the full scope of my experience as a developmental editor and revision coach. Working through this technique along with the video is like borrowing my brain for 4 hours.
No, but it definitely helps. If you haven't seen The Proposal (starring Ryan Reynolds and Sandra Bullock), I recommend watching it either before or after the workshop itself for context. But even if this movie is totally new to you, don't worry!
I introduce each micro-writing sprint with an example scene from the movie to demonstrate what type of story and character elements you should be focusing on in the next exercise.
You'll find everything you need inside of my online university. If you're already a student, you'll find your new workshop inside your course dashboard. If you're a new student, you'll get email instructions for logging in.
You can ask questions directly on the "lessons" inside my online university. Just leave a comment there. I do regular checks of all my courses and respond when I can. I likely won't answer personally specific questions or teach any higher-level concepts via comment, but I will definitely try to clarify any major points of confusion about the Starter Kit and its contents.
Asking in the course comments makes our dialogue visible to the other students as well. Someone may have the same question as you (and vice versa), which saves us all time and energy.
My team and I would be happy to chat about it! Email us at hi@suebrownmoore.com
We answer most emails within 48 hours unless it's over a weekend or one of us is traveling. (But keep in mind that we try to observe moderate, healthy weekday working hours and may not be able to respond to your email before any limited-time offers expire.)
