You know something's wrong with your story. You just can't figure out what.

You know something's wrong with your story. 

You just can't figure out what.

Enemies To Experts™

A Story Sorcery® program with Sue Brown-Moore

The monthly membership for romance writers who want to stop rewriting blind

and start TRUSTING the decisions you make about your own manuscripts.

You've been through it before.

You finish a draft, or you get deep into a revision, and something feels off. Not the writing itself.

Your writing is strong, but... 

The story isn't doing what you need it to do, and you can't put your finger on why.

  • So you ask for feedback
  • You get three different opinions that contradict one other.
  • You try to address them all.

And now the manuscript is different, but it's not better

It might actually be worse.

You DON'T need more opinions.

You need to learn how to think like an editor.

The real frustration isn't that you can't write.

It's that you can't tell the difference between a scene that needs a dialogue fix and a scene that's masking a character arc problem. 

Between a trope issue and a lack of hero motivation

Between something that needs polish and something that needs to be rebuilt on a different foundation.

That's not a talent problem.

It's a diagnostic skill that you simply don't have (yet). 

And it's the one thing that makes every other technique, craft book, and piece of feedback you've ever received actually useful.

Enemies To Experts teaches that skill.

One concept per month.

On your schedule. 

Using your own manuscript.

Learn how to think like an editor.

Because falling in love with your manuscript starts with understanding it.

Enemies to Experts helps romance writers build trust in your own storytelling instincts, one month at a time. 

By helping you see the real WHY behind WHAT you're feeling when something in your draft doesn't work.

Instead of piling on more techniques or collecting feedback that doesn't quite fit...

You'll explore one core concept each month through:

  • a short lesson, and
  • and a focused writing exercise

So you can finally figure out what's wrong and 

stop the cycle of exhausting endless rewrites.

Here's how it works

Every month, I'll give you a quick lesson and an exploration exercise, plus private tips & examples. They work together, designed for about one hour of working time.

The LESSON

A short lesson where I introduce one storytelling concept and show you how it fits into the bigger picture of your manuscript.

 No long lectures. No theory overload. Just one strategic WHY that helps you look at your story through an editor's eye

And it's created for romance writers.

The EXERCISE

A desk at the Romance Writers Finishing School (Moonlight Manuscript Manor) by Sue Brown-Moore

One exploration prompt that you practice on your own manuscript. This isn't busywork or a forgettable worksheet that you'll misplace. 

It's a purposeful activity that helps you apply what you just learned to your own story, so you can spot things after that you couldn't see before

Tips & EXAMPLES

Cozy chair from the Dean's Office at the Romance Writers Finishing School (Moonlight Manuscript Manor) by Sue Brown-Moore

Members-only audio episodes where I walk through real examples, answer questions from that month's discussion thread, and occasionally feature short critiques of (anonymous) member work

Think of it as sitting in on an editor's thought process, without having to share your pages.

You also get ongoing access to the

Cake, Not Chaos: Moment To Moment Method workshop replay & workbook

Full E2E archive of past lessons (never expires, so you won't "fall behind")

Monthly discussion threads, where members can share your work & your wins

You’ve tried other things.

  • You've read articles.
  • You've bought craft books.
  • You've taken courses.
  • You've collected feedback from betas and critique partners.
  • Maybe you've even hired editors.

And you're still not sure what's wrong.

Because free content is scattered

Courses are heavy and hard to finish. 

Writing groups expect you to perform.

And memberships often ask you to show up in ways that drain you.

 Enemies To Experts is different.

This space doesn't do any of that. 

We learn one concept per month, do one exercise, and there’s no pressure to share, post, or keep pace with anyone.

You do the work when it fits your life, and the work itself teaches you how to think about your story in new, exciting, mind-opening ways.

  • No community obligations.
  • No content avalanche.
  • No performance.
  • No loud voices making you feel small.

What you'll build over your first year.

Self-trust Development

The monthly exercises showcase & explain four big areas of story understanding.

You'll start by learning how to figure out what KIND of story problem you're actually dealing with, so you stop wasting time fixing symptoms instead of causes.

Deep Understanding

From there, you'll dig into why your characters resist change (and why you do too, as the writer), and how that resistance shows up in your manuscript as finicky scenes and flat arcs.

Then you'll learn the specific, nuanced ways your hero's internal growth shows up in the plot, so you can publish stories where the flow feels natural instead of forced.

Flexibility & Confidence

And you'll finish our 12 months together learning to set story goals that create momentum in your manuscript and your career, without pressure or hustle.

Each month stands on its own. 

You don't have to start at the beginning, and you don't have to go in order.

But when you stick with it, you'll notice how the concepts keep building on each other and how your instincts get sharper and more reliable with each one.

Still have questions? Check out our FAQs here.

Confidence & community are a click away.

Enemies To Experts™ is for romance writers who are done second-guessing their instincts, who crave a serious, stable, quiet place to learn and practice.

E2E is for you if...

  • You read and write romantic fiction (any subgenre, any heat level).
  • You've drafted or revised at least one romantic fiction manuscript.
  • You want to learn to trust your story instincts, not depend on someone else to tell you what's wrong.
  • You prefer working at your own pace, without any pressure to post, share, or show up on someone else's schedule.
  • You care about why your story decisions work, not just collecting more writing techniques.

Enemies to Experts is built for romance writers who already know the basics but can't always explain what's off in a draft. You don't need to be published. You do need to have enough experience to know what revision feels like and why it's frustrating

If you write contemporary, historical, paranormal, sci-fi romance, romantic suspense, romantasy, or any other romantic subgenre or mashup where the lovers' relationship drives the individual heroes' growth arcs, you belong here.

E2E is NOT for you if...

  • You don't read or write romantic fiction. Everything here is built around the intricacies of romance storytelling.
  • You want or need personal feedback. This membership teaches you how to understand your own work, through practice and working discoveries. 
  • You need real-time interaction or right-now answers. This space is intentionally designed to be calm, self-paced, and asynchronous.
  • You're new (or new-ish) to writing romantic fiction. The concepts here assume you already have enough experience to draft and revise a story on your own.
  • You need external accountability to stay on track. This membership trusts you to show up when and how it works for your life. 
  • You're staunchly anti-AI. I use responsible, ethically sourced AI tools in parts of this program. (Full AI statement below.)

I do occasionally feature anonymized member examples in the monthly members-only tips podcast, but spots are very limited and never guaranteed.

The heart of this program is teaching you to see what's happening in your own stories so you can make your best personal decisions about them.

A note on AI in this program

I use AI tools in Enemies to Experts to help me teach more efficiently. That includes an AI-assisted podcast for monthly lessons and AI-supported visuals for program materials. All of it is built on my own frameworks, my own teaching, and my own intellectual property. Nothing is generated from scratch by a machine.

I believe in using AI responsibly and transparently. And I expect the same from you. This program is for writers who want to write. Your stories, your voice, and your creative decisions need to be yours. If you're using AI as a shortcut to skip the work of actually writing your book, this isn't the right fit. But if you're here because you genuinely want to get better at understanding and revising your own stories, we're on the same page.

If you're comfortable with this approach, welcome. If not, I respect that, and I'd rather you opt out now than feel uncomfortable after joining.

In their words

Here's what the students in my workshops, programs, and 1:1 work have said about their experience with my teaching style and techniques.

CP Rider

Sue has a compassionate, respectful way of teaching the material that makes me feel comfortable sharing my pre-published work with her. She's wonderful. :)

Story Sorcery Society (SSS) founding member & urban fantasy author of the Sundance Series

I love the way you always gently guide us to the answer. Your calm voice leads us along the path, each step building on the one before it, until we have no choice but to reach the inevitable conclusion. 


You're a GREAT instructor.

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Grace Best

SSS founding member & romantic suspense writer

Kay Freeman | cohort participant & romance Writer

Sue's concepts transformed my writing

I just wanted to drop a quick note to share some good news, my book Other Worlds won a Stiletto Award this year (2025) from Contemporary Romance Writers in the speculative/paranormal division! 


I know that the work I did in your courses contributed to that success. The concepts you taught helped me shape character arcs in ways that truly transformed my writing. Thank you for all you do for writers.

Professor of romance novels

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"Sue Brown-Moore is essentially a professor of romance novels and all her information is expert level."

From enemy to expert.

It doesn't happen all at once.

But somewhere around month three or four, you'll start to notice that you're keeping more of what you write. 

You're not ripping out whole chapters without knowing why.

 When something feels off in a scene, you can start to tell whether the problem is in your story's structure, your hero's motivation, or how those pieces fit together

And that matters because each one needs a completely different fix.

You're making decisions faster.

And you're second-guessing them less.

That's not because you've memorized a formula.

It's because you've been practicing a specific, strategic way of thinking about your story, one concept at a time.

And those concepts are starting to stack.

This isn't a sprint to a solution.

It's how you learn to trust your own judgment.

Some members are actively drafting.

Some are deep in revision

Some are between projects, just letting the ideas sit

This space supports all three.

You don't need to keep up. The work in E2E is designed to meet you where you are.

And if you've been here a while, you'll notice how the same concepts keep showing up differently, depending on what you're working on.

That's the point. These ideas are meant to grow with you.

You can come and go from this membership as your writing life changes.

You'll always be welcome back.

Join Enemies To Experts

Here's what to expect when you check out:

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    Click the "Join" button below.
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Less than a DoorDashed dinner.

Cancel anytime.

  • Immediate access to the program
  • The monthly module (lesson, exercise, example, and members-only podcast)
  • Ongoing access to the Cake, Not Chaos: Moment to Moment Method workshop replay
  • Full archive of all past monthly materials*
  • Discussion and reflection threads for the monthly exercises
  • Replay access to the quarterly Q&A call

No contracts. No commitments. Stay as long as this space supports your writing, and come back whenever you're ready after you take a break.

*The modules will be released monthly, starting in April 2026.

What romance writers are saying...

about working with me.

Hollie Smurthwaite

Sue is one of my all-time favorite teachers.

The exercises we did where we listed ideas for 2-3 scenes that show a specific spot on the character arc, that was really eye-opening. Not only did it generate scene ideas, but it helped make sure that the character arc would unfold in a way the reader would feel. It's also a great way to get past a block, because instead of trying to wrap your head around the entire book, you only had to focus on a few pieces at a time.

Hollie Smurthwaite  //  SSS founding member & paranormal romance writer

Worth every penny

If you want to know your main characters… really know them to write their story as best as you can, take The Root Fear Factor and don’t look back. I learned things about my main female character (that I’ve been writing for 22 years) that never dawned on me before hand. It’s worth every penny!

Meg Gassler  //  Cohort student & fantasy romance writer

Sue pushes me to write better and better novels. She’s a fantastic editor. I don’t know how long it would’ve taken me to sharpen up my game without her, and I really don’t want to speculate on that either. Thank you, Sue!

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JS Harker

Editing client & urban fantasy romance writer

Her voice is lively and pleasant to listen to, which is imperative in a podcast. The episodes I've listened to so far have been jam-packed with good information on actual writing."

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Trillian19

Apple Podcasts review

A badass, honestly.

Faelan Aurelius - Writer of Character Driven Fantasy and Scifi

Before I encountered the things you teach, I couldn't find a model for the emotional journey that felt real

And as someone who understands a lot of this stuff better intuitively than I do logically, it's been immensely helpful having it laid out in a clear and concise manner.

Janine Williams Writer

Sue turns on the 'aha' lights and inspires confidence

Sue turns on the 'aha' lights and inspires confidence by outlining simple but vital steps to writing a story that will move readers' hearts.

Sue forces you to dig deep into your character and ask questions.

Kay Freeman

Romance writer

Meet Sue (waving hand)

Hi there! I'm a developmental editor and revision coach who has worked exclusively with romance writers for over a decade. 

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I don't write romance myself. But I read it constantly, I study it obsessively, and I've spent years helping writers figure out what's really going on in their manuscripts when something feels off but they can't explain why.

My approach is different from what you'll find in most craft books or writing courses. I focus on the psychology of your characters and the emotional experience of your readers, because that's what drives a great romance. When you understand why your hero makes the choices they make, everything else in the story starts to fall into place.

I built Enemies to Experts because I kept meeting writers who weren't ready for my higher-level programs but were clearly a fit for the way I think about storytelling. You need a space to practice seeing your manuscripts differently, without pressure, without performance, and without someone else telling you what to do.

If that sounds like you, this is that space.

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Publishers Weekly
Women In Publishing summit
LA Weekly 15 Book Coaches to Watch in 2023
202 Las Vegas Writers Conference in-person faculty (Sue Brown-Moore)
Dreamspinner Press
Find your Readers Summit
A few places you may have seen me

Wanna learn something new before you join?

The Story Sorcery® Podcast on a phone screen

The Story Sorcery® podcast is a great place to start.

Each episode digs into one romantic fiction storytelling concept, the same way the monthly exercises do inside this membership. Listen on Apple Podcasts, Spotify, or wherever you get your podcasts.

Got a question? Read on!

How much time does this take each month?

About an hour for the core lesson and exercise. 

The monthly podcast episodes add another 30-45 minutes of listening, but you can do that on a walk, in the car, or whenever it fits your day. 

Deep thinkers who like to explore every angle might spend more time, and that's perfectly fine. You know your own habits best.

What if I miss a month (or several)?

There's no need to "catch up".

Every month stands on its own, and everything stays in the archive. You're welcome to pick back up whenever you're ready.

This isn't a course with a finish line. It's a practice and rhythm you can step in and out of whenever is best for you.

How long do I have access?

As long as you are a member in good standing—which means financially and following our community behavior expectations—you can log in and access any current or past module (and its discussion threads) at any time.

Scroll down to the bottom of this question list to read the full Code of Conduct.

Can I cancel and rejoin later?

Yes! Simply cancel your monthly membership inside the Heartbeat platform before your next billing date and you won't be charged, and your access will end at the end of the current month.

When you're ready to come back, just reactivate your membership, and you'll regain access to the entire archive. There's no penalty for taking a break. 

That said, this program is not designed for binging. It's not like Netflix where you can activate for a month, speed through everything new, then turn it off again. You need to spend real time and thought on the monthly exercises, so just take it one month at a time.

Is this a critique group?

No. This is a learning and reflection space, not a feedback space.

I don't critique individual manuscripts or your assignments in this program (that's what my higher-level programs are for).

This is also not a space to critique one another. We encourage supportive discussion, but comments like "I think you should do this instead" or "here's what's wrong with your work" are strictly prohibited. 

My primary goal is to give you a safe space to learn, practice, and grow into your confidence. And you can't do that when you're worried that someone will criticize you for trying.

But that doesn't mean you get no help. The monthly podcast features anonymized examples, and that's also where I answer all your questions in one spot. But, ultimately, the core experience is about you learning to understand your own work.

Are there any actual turn-ins? Are you grading our work?

There are no required submissions of any assignments. You can be as quiet or as active as you like. 

And I'm not grading any assignments or editing any manuscripts. That's not what this program is for.  

If you need personal feedback on a manuscript, consider applying for my Story Sorcery Society program or booking a personal consultation.

What am I getting for $37 a month if there's no personal feedback?

You're not paying for access to me. You're paying for a structured way to get better at understanding your own stories, month after month, without needing anyone else to tell you what's wrong. 

The lesson teaches one concept. The exercise helps you practice it on your own manuscript. The monthly private podcast shows you how I think through real examples. And the archive means the value keeps growing the longer you're a member.

The core work takes about an hour a month, and the rest happens naturally as you start thinking about your storywork (and your manuscript) differently.

Is this best for aspiring or published writers?

All are welcome, as long as you are already comfortable writing and completing a full manuscript draft of romantic fiction.

But this is definitely not a space for true beginners or for writers who are simply curious about romance books. 

You won't learn HOW to write inside Enemies To Experts. You will learn how to diagnose the problems you intuitively spot, so that the "fix" is clear, true, and lasting. 

Is this only for romance writers?

YES. The teaching, the exercises, the examples, and the community are all built specifically for writers of romantic fiction

If your story centers on a romantic relationship that drives the heroes' growth arcs, whether that's contemporary romance, historical, paranormal, romantasy, romantic suspense, or any other romance subgenre or mashup, you're in the right place.

Do I need a finished manuscript to join?

It helps, but it's not required.

The exercises are designed for you to practice on your own work, so having a draft in progress (or even a few chapters) will make the experience richer.

That said, the concepts you'll learn here also help you write a stronger first draft, so if you're still working on one, you'll get value from the thinking even before you're in revision mode.

Is this on Facebook?

Absolutely not.

I personally do not use Facebook, and I get frustrated when I can't find what I need (because the algorithm decided to hide it). 

Enemies To Experts lives and operates in my private space on a platform called Heartbeat. It's similar to Circle, but with a warmer feel. There is a mobile app, a desktop app, and you can also log in through a web browser, so tons of ways to learn and connect with your fellow members (without getting distracted by ads or the drama of the day).

Can I get a refund if I don't like it?

Short answer: No. Because this is a monthly program.

So if you find that it's not a fit once you've joined, simply cancel your membership before the next month's rebilling.

If you take advantage of any of the special offerings—like the discounted annual offer in March 2026—you receive perks and discounts in return for committing to the full year. So if you're not sure it will be for you, just start with monthly.

If you're not sure it will be right for you, email my team and we'll help you decide. (But keep in mind that we try to observe healthy working hours and may not be able to respond to your email before any limited-time offers expire.)

What is your community Code of Conduct?

I'm so glad you asked, because it's really important for everyone to have the same expectations. This is the verbatim copy from what is posted inside my Heartbeat community platform:


Our Goal

The Sue Brown-Moore Heartbeat Community is dedicated to supporting writers of romantic fiction. Our intention is to provide a harassment-free experience for everyone.

We do not tolerate harassment of community members in ANY form.


Applicability and Scope

This code of conduct applies to all of this community's spaces, including public channels, private channels, threads, direct messages, voice rooms, comment sections, and live events, both online and off.

Anyone who violates this code of conduct may be sanctioned or expelled from these spaces at the discretion of the administrators.


Toward a Welcoming and Safe Environment

We hope to create an environment in which diverse individuals can collaborate and interact in a positive and affirming way.

Examples of behavior that contributes to creating this sort of environment include:

  • Using welcoming and inclusive language
  • Being respectful of differing viewpoints and experiences
  • Gracefully accepting constructive criticism
  • Focusing on what is best for the overall community
  • Showing empathy towards other community members
  • Referring to the romantic fiction genre (and its vulnerable subject matter) with respect


Anti-Harassment Statement

This community will not tolerate harassment of any kind.

Examples of harassment include:

  • Offensive comments related to gender, gender identity and expression, sexual orientation, disability, mental illness, neuro(a)typicality, physical appearance, pregnancy status, veteran status, political affiliation, marital status, body size, age, race, national origin, ethnic origin, nationality, immigration status, language, religion or lack thereof, or other identity marker. This includes anti-Indigenous/Nativeness, anti-Blackness, anti-Asian, and anti-LGBTQIA+ sentiments.
  • Unwelcome comments regarding a person's lifestyle choices and practices, including those related to food, health, parenting, relationships, drugs, and employment.
  • Deliberate misgendering, using inappropriate pronouns, or use of "dead" or rejected names.
  • Gratuitous or off-topic sexual images or behavior in spaces where they're not appropriate.
  • Simulated physical contact (eg, textual descriptions like "hug" or "backrub") after a request to stop or when consent has clearly been withdrawn.
  • Threats of violence.
  • Incitement of violence towards any individual or group, including encouraging a person to commit suicide or to engage in self-harm.
  • Deliberate intimidation.
  • Stalking or following - online or in the physical world.
  • Harassing photography or recording, including logging online activity for harassment purposes.
  • Sustained disruption of discussion.
  • Unwelcome sexual attention.
  • Patterns of inappropriate social contact, such as requesting/assuming inappropriate levels of intimacy with others.
  • Continued one-on-one communication after requests to cease.
  • Deliberate "outing" of any aspect of a person's identity without their consent except as necessary to protect vulnerable people from intentional abuse.
  • Publication of non-harassing private communication.
  • Jokes that resemble the above, such as "hipster racism", still count as harassment even if meant satirically or ironically.

If you have questions or concerns about these issues please feel free to message an admin or ask for an opportunity to explore the issue with a moderator and volunteers.


Reporting

If you are being harassed by a member of our community, notice that someone else is being harassed, or have any other concerns, please contact the administrators via hi@suebrownmoore.com. If the person who is harassing you is on the admin team, they will not be involved in handling or resolving the incident.

The admin team will respond to any complaint as promptly as possible we can. If you do not get a timely response (for example, if no admins are currently online) then please put your personal safety and well-being first, and consider logging out and/or contacting the admins by email at hi@suebrownmoore.com.

This code of conduct applies to our community's spaces, but if you are being harassed by a member of our community outside our spaces, we still want to know about it. We will take all good-faith reports of harassment by our members, especially the administrators, seriously. This includes harassment outside our spaces and harassment that took place at any point in time. The abuse team reserves the right to exclude people from the community based on their past behavior, including behavior outside of our spaces and behavior towards people who are not in this community.

In order to protect Team Sue and our volunteers from abuse and burnout, we reserve the right to reject any report we believe to have been made in bad faith. Reports intended to silence legitimate criticism may be deleted without response.


Enforcement Process

Every code of conduct violation report will be treated with seriousness and care. If a member's immediate safety and security is threatened, an individual admin may take any action that they deem appropriate, up to and including temporarily banning the offender from the community. In less urgent situations, two or more admins (if possible) will discuss the offense and mutually arrive at a suitable response, which will be shared with the offender privately. Whatever the resolution that they decide upon, the decision of the admins involved in a violation case will be considered final.

We will respect confidentiality requests for the purpose of protecting victims of abuse. At our discretion, we may publicly name a person about whom we've received harassment complaints, or privately warn third parties about them, if we believe that doing so will increase the safety of our members or the general public. We will not name harassment victims without their affirmative consent.


Consequences

Participants asked to stop any harassing behavior are expected to comply immediately. If a participant engages in harassing behavior, the administrators may take any action they deem appropriate, up to and including expulsion from the community (without a refund) and identification of the participant as a harasser to other members. At the discretion of the admins, or by request, one or more of the parties involved may request to discuss the violation and how to avoid similar situations in the future.

I have a different question.

My team and I would be happy to chat about it! Email us at hi@suebrownmoore.com

We answer most emails within 48 hours unless it's over a weekend or one of us is traveling. (But keep in mind that we try to observe healthy working hours and may not be able to respond to your email before any limited-time offers expire.)

Falling in love with your manuscript begins with understanding it.

This is for romance writers who want to make story decisions you actually believe in.

  • Not following a formula.
  • Not adopting someone else's system.

But making your own calls about your own story.

Because you understand what's happening in it.

Enemies to Experts gives you a place to build your confidence, one month at a time, at your own pace, using your own manuscript.

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