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Fast-track your story setup

in less time than it takes to eat lunch.

Introducing the 20-Minute Hero Makeover, the guided workbook experience where I personally talk you through every decision to set up a powerful story you can build on.

The 20-Minute Hero Makeover is for you if...

You want your stories to feel relatable and real

You want to write flawed heroes with big emotion

You want a simpler version of the hero’s journey

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The 20-Minute Hero Makeover will help you…

Troubleshoot your story before you write it (or when you get stuck in your first draft)

Envision a simple story framework so you can write without the pressure of plotting

Feel confident about pantsing your scenes or writing intuitively (by writing between the 5 key Moments)

Improve your brainstorming process for creating new stories

The best part? It's only $49.

Understanding the hero’s journey doesn’t have to be complicated.

And getting help doesn’t have to be expensive.

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Your 20-Minute Hero Makeover includes:

A powerhouse workbook

Map out the 5 story growth moments & avoid the 3 biggest pitfalls for your hero's journey.

private podcast coaching

I talk you through the crucial decisions for your hero's story setup so you can get started quick.

Quick answers as you work

You've got questions, the 20MHM has answers! Click right to the topic that's stumping you.

ongoing Student Access

Where you can re-access your worksheet and audio guide anytime you like. No more lost documents or abandoned podcast feeds.

Your 20-minute workshop is waiting in your student dashboard whenever you need it. 

It's like Sue handed me a laser to cut through all the overwhelm.

Danika Bloom

romance writer & author coach

I recently took Sue Brown-Moore's 20-Minute Hero Makeover course after my developmental editor suggested I increase the tension between my hero and heroine. 

I was amazed at how quickly the course helped me zero in on the issues. It's like Sue handed me a laser to cut through all the overwhelm.

So if you're looking to create compelling character arcs and break free from endless rewrites, this course is a game changer. I highly recommend it.

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Start your 20-Minute Hero Makeover here.

Student testimonial from Joyce Martin: "Before I did Sue's 20MHM workshop my hero had no purpose except as a foil to my heroine which left some scenes superfluous and hard to write. Now he has his own story arc to play off the heroine, making my story easier to write with a stronger ending in mind."
Student testimonial from Joyce Martin: "Before I did Sue's 20MHM workshop my hero had no purpose except as a foil to my heroine which left some scenes superfluous and hard to write. Now he has his own story arc to play off the heroine, making my story easier to write with a stronger ending in mind."

You need this quick-win workshop if...

  • Crafting a believable transformation for your hero feels overwhelming and elusive
  • You feel stuck in a loop of endless rewrites and struggle to write character arcs that are compelling and authentic
  • You want your characters to deeply connect with readers and leave a lasting impression
  • You're looking for a simple, intuitive framework to help you plan out your character's emotional journey
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The workshop helped make sense of what I needed to do to get my character to tick.

Traci Dowe/Kenworth - YA dark fantasy writer

Before I did Sue's 20MHM workshop, I usually struggled to find my character's want or desire. Now, the root fear of the character is what I look for and why I dig deep into my character's to discover.

The 20-Minute Hero Makeover workshop changed the way I look at my characters, how I dig into their lives to discover their fears and who they are.

The workshop helped make sense of what I needed to do to get my character to tick. It kickstarted their lives.

It'll bring you closer to your characters and open that door to a better story.

See the 20MHM in action.

Click below to listen to a sneak peek of each audio lesson.

Learn the secret sauce of stories that resonate

Learn the secret to powerful story arcs that make readers deeply feel as I walk you through...

  • What character-driven fiction is and why it is so powerful 
  • Why plotting advice is not universal (and why some techniques don't work for you)
  • The 2 plot requirements for stories that readers feel and remember  
  • The fully upgraded version of the 5 Character Arc Moments, now featuring extra character development exercises inside a comprehensive digital, fillable workbook

Map the 5 stages of your hero's emotional journey

Experience Aha! moments that shape the trajectory of your entire story by understanding...

  • What defines each of the 5 stages (and the critical choices you need to consider
  • How the 5 phases build on one another to create a tapestry of feelings 
  • The limitations and guiding light for your hero at each phase (it's harder than it seems!)

Avoid 3 writing pitfalls that lead to rewrites

Build consistent confidence in your early story drafts by understanding...

  • How to know when your hero's 5 Moments don't fit your author brand
  • The most important piece of the hero's character that authors get wrong 
  • The simple test that will measure your Stage 4 hero Moment (this is critical)

Take the next steps that are right for you.

Go beyond the workshop and keep refining your story on your own terms. We talk about...

  • Tips for analyzing your story's depth (and whether it fits your storytelling style)
  • How to prevent information overwhelm when analyzing your story.
  • On-demand resources you can grab right now to keep the momentum going.

The guidance you get inside the 20-Minute Hero Makeover is transformational.

For you and for your heroes.

Before now, I only offered this style of unique step-by-step insight in my 1:1 story consultations and small-group programs.

(And those cost way more than $49 USD.)

Student testimonial from Faelan Aurelius: "So, I initially *couldn't stand* the whole Lie / Truth / Wound / Fear approach that is used in a lot of approaches to character arcs. It generally reads as very simplistic and reductive -- the opposite of what you want for character-based stories. And through this workshop, as well as Sue's approach in general, including Liar Liar Plot on Fire and her multitude of useful and well-written articles, her setup is the only version that I find useful in my stories."
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"You are brilliant and I reckon, I've just touched the surface on what you offer and can do for me."

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Writer of contemporary women's fiction with romantic elements

What my students are saying...

Other plotting methods hurt my soul!

HL Miller - A student in the 20MHM

I am mostly a panster and haven’t been able to wrap my brain around other plotting methods and they hurt my soul when I think about attempting to implement them. 

But I can make sense of the 5 moments method. I was able to easily apply it to my two main characters in the story I’m currently editing to check their growth arcs.

Before I did Sue's 20MHM workshop, I didn't know what my character's arc really looked like. Now, I do.

The workbook was so helpful! There was a clearly defined goal and all sorts of resources and links to look at if you got stuck.

I found it very helpful in defining my main character's fear and arc.

Annie Sherwood

Romance writer

Before I did Sue's 20MHM workshop, I struggled with understanding the 5 Moments. Now, I can use them to plan out my character's growth arc.

The course gives a great foundational understanding of how to start creating a believable character arc.

It has helped me tremendously in outlining a preferable character arc to work into my plot.

I have a much better grasp on Root Fear and how to brainstorm one that launches my outline.

Marc S. Davis  SciFi writer

As a pantser, I tend to just write what I think is interesting, leaving a lot of editing or dithering when I get to the middle or finish the story. Outlining before writing always spoiled the serendipity of the story line for me.


But this 20MHM gives just enough of an idea of where my character needs to go and achieve without every detail itemized in an outline.

It gave me key moments that help guide the story and define the scenes I need in my story before I start.

This workshop delivers. If you are struggling with character development or manuscript dawdling, this workshop will force you to consider what is important to your story and give you a new way of looking at your story. It helps!

Joyce Martin Historical romance writer

Cut through all the overwhelm.

Danika Bloom - Romance writer & coach

I recently took Sue Brown-Moore's 20-Minute Hero Makeover course after my developmental editor suggested I increase the tension between my hero and heroine.

I was amazed at how quickly the course helped me zero in on the issues. It's like Sue handed me a laser to cut through all the overwhelm.

So if you're looking to create compelling character arcs and break free from endless rewrites, this course is a game changer. I highly recommend it.

It forces you to dig deep into your character and ask questions.

Kay Freeman

Romance writer

Before I did Sue's 20MHM workshop, I usually struggled to find my character's want or desire. Now, the Root Fear of the character is what I look for and why I dig deep into my character's to discover.

The 20-Minute Hero Makeover workshop changed the way I look at my characters, how I dig into their lives to discover their fears and who they are.

The workshop helped make sense of what I needed to do to get my character to tick. It kickstarted their lives.

It'll bring you closer to your characters and open that door to a better story.

Traci Dowe/Kenworth  YA dark fantasy writer

So, I initially *couldn't stand* the whole Lie / Truth / Wound / Fear approach that is used in a lot of approaches to character arcs. It generally reads as very simplistic and reductive—the opposite of what you want for character-based stories. And through this workshop, as well as Sue's approach in general, including Liar Liar Plot on Fire and her multitude of useful and well-written articles, her setup is the only version that I find useful in my stories.

It gives me a very specific and usable way to focus on the story I'm trying to tell, while also including enough room to include the complexity of real people and the best characters.


I did really like the approach of penciling out your characters five big moments at the beginning of laying out a story, a practice which would have saved me a lot of irritation a few months ago!!

Faelan Aurelius SciFi & fantasy writer

Starting with Root Fears was huge.

Bev Hanna - urban fantasy writer 

Before: Characters were flat, unmotivated, not real. Now, they're still WIPs, but they're becoming real and relatable, with problems readers can recognize.

For the first time, I'm starting with characters first, and the Moments have become the turning points that make the story flow.

Starting with root fears was huge. I'm still working my way through the course, (because, so many MCs) but I expect there will be more "aha" moments as I do.

Before I did Sue's 20MHM workshop, I had no idea how to write a character arc. Now, I feel empowered with tools to write compelling character arcs that will help readers connect with my characters.

I thought the pacing was great and the information is very helpful! Thank you so much!

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Students in the 20-Minute Hero Makeover

Hi, I'm Sue!

I'm passionate about helping fiction writers craft unforgettable characters. As a book revision coach, I specialize in guiding authors through the process of creating compelling character-driven stories. My approach focuses on character transformation, breaking away from traditional plot-first methods to help you build characters that truly resonate with readers.

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Over the years, I've had the joy of working with many talented writers, helping them nurture their unique voices and bring their characters to life. While I've been fortunate to receive recognition in the publishing industry, what really drives me is seeing writers like you achieve your own professional "Happily Ever Afters." I'd be thrilled to join you on your journey to creating characters that linger in readers' hearts long after they've turned the last page.

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Sue Brown-Moore is akin to having a favorite author. I intend to take every class she puts together because I've done several, and I've never been disappointed. She's my one-click buy for author tools.

Orlando DeVito Writer

A wonderful talent for explaining

I have been following your teachings for some time now, and you never fail to amaze. You have a wonderful talent for explaining what many would consider obscure.

Your ideas are clear and simple. I truly believe now (after trying to write by beat) that knowing what the Root Fear is absolutely key since it is the engine behind the character driven plot/story.

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I greatly appreciate your teaching -- style and content. I've read many of your articles / emails over the last 2 or 3 years.

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Sue turns on the 'aha' lights and inspires confidence

Sue turns on the 'aha' lights and inspires confidence by outlining simple but vital steps to writing a story that will move readers' hearts.

I really like how you explain it so easily.

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I like Sue's teaching style and the vast amount of resources she makes available on her website.

Got questions?

Is this just for romance writers?

Nope! If you write happy-ending fiction about heroes who experience positive growth arcs—become better versions of themselves—through the events in your books, you can use this technique.

I do mention romance books a few times in the audio sessions, but the character growth arc is intrinsic to all character-driven fiction.

Do I get personal coaching with this workshop?

You get access to a private podcast feed where you can listen to me walking you through each field on your digital worksheet, step by step. 

The podcast feed is pre-recorded, so you'll be listening to my general advice on how to tackle these super important story planning stages.

You'll also get access to a course area with written lessons, and you can ask questions about the technique or concepts I teach there. (I don't give advice for individual stories, though.)

What does the "20 minutes" in the title refer to? How long will it actually take me?

The audio walkthrough of your workbook is split into 4 separate episodes. The total listening time for the full set is less than 20 minutes.

I've also designed the exercises so that you can speed through them for your first "draft" of the 5 hero Moments in that same time frame (aim for 5-10 minutes per "lesson"). But keep in mind that not all authors work at the same pace, so don't be afraid to give yourself extra time. 

The first time you do the exercises will probably take the longest, especially if you are an introspective writer. Some students need much longer—one recommended planning for a "weekend" of workshop time—because their style is to go deeper on the story from conception. You know yourself best

Don't be afraid to set a timer and push yourself to get a super messy rough "draft" version of your hero's 5 Moments just go get you started. We're not going for perfect here. You can always revisit the workshop and improve on what you started with. 

I prefer to read rather than listen. Is there a transcript?

Absolutely! You can find the individual audio episodes and their text transcripts in your course dashboard.

It looks like this:

Preview of the audio transcripts inside each lesson

What if I don't have a podcast player?

Even if you aren't a podcast person (and don't have a preferred podcast player), listening to the audio walkthroughs is a breeze. They're embedded right into the lessons inside your student dashboard in my online university. So you can log in there to listen to them whenever you want.

Preview of the audio transcripts inside each lesson

The benefit of loading the audio coaching episodes into a podcast player is that you can listen to them anywhere—cooking, exercising, walking the dog, cleaning the house, taking a bath, however you get your creative juices flowing! This workshop does not require you to be at a computer to do the thought work.

If it's a podcast, can't I just access it for free?

If I hosted the 20-Minute Hero Makeover audio episodes on a public RSS feed, then yes, you totally could. 

But this series is private, so only the students who are officially enrolled in the workshop course will be allowed to access it.

If that sounds complicated, don't worry! It's super simple to use, and I walk you through it in your student dashboard. 

How is the 20MHM digital workbook different from your $7 digital character arc worksheet?

The $7 version only covers the 5 steps of the character arc itself, and it does not come with any extra coaching insight. It's most helpful for authors who already understand the 5 phases of the character transformation arc and just need a quick, easy place to do their brainstorming.

The digital workbook is a full workbook, and it walks you through a series of in-depth sanity-check and troubleshooting exercises. It also pairs hand-in-hand with my audio coaching episodes that you will get as a private podcast feed. 

Between the digital workbook and the audio sessions, I personally coach you through each decision step you'll need to make to plan the foundational pieces of your hero's story. 

How is it different from the Liar, Liar, Plot on Fire course? Do I need both?

Great question!

I introduce the transformation growth arc in many of my programs, usually with a snazzy graphic where we quickly flip through a short description of each of the 5 stages. I repeat this introduction so often because your hero's growth arc is so important. It is literally (and figuratively) the heart of the story itself. 

The 20-Minute Hero Makeover was created to work with Liar, Liar, Plot on Fire and all of my other programs that build on this central idea of the hero's psychological growth. 

Where Liar, Liar, Plot on Fire does briefly outline all 5 stages, it only focuses on stages 2 and 4, which contain the two important Plot Milestones that anchor your hero's growth arc to the external plot: The Opportunity and The Turning Point (because these two stages directly hook into your hero's Lie).

The 20-Minute Hero Makeover introduces the concept of your hero's Root Fear, the most crucial Character Core Value in your entire story. In the 20MHM, I help you start iterating on the Root Fear and give you a story analysis technique to troubleshoot it yourself. Liar, Liar, Plot on also touches on the Root Fear and gives real story examples for even more context.

If you get your hero's Root Fear wrong (or if you don't dig deep enough), every piece of the story you build on top of it will have to be rewritten. The 20MHM helps you dial in that Root Fear, and Liar, Liar, Plot on Fire helps you begin building the story framework that the Root Fear anchors.

So, while there is some overlap between the 20-Minute Hero Makeover and Liar, Liar, Plot on Fire, one is not a replacement for the other

What if I don't plan my stories at all? Can this still help me?

Yes, definitely! Most of my story planning and setup techniques can also be used as strategic revision tools, and this one is a powerful addition to my existing offer suite. 

If you prefer to write your full story before starting any sort of edits, you can use the 20-Minute Hero Makeover as a sort of sanity checklist to know where to start revisions on your story. Just follow the same exercise prompts I guide you through in the audio sessions, and then look at how your results compare to your existing manuscript.

How long do I have access?

As long as this workshop lives in my online university, you can log in and access it. Some people call this "lifetime" access, but I find that confusing. Whose lifetime? Mine? Yours? Instead of saying "for the lifetime of the course", I just say ongoing access.

And no, I have no future plans to retire this program, so.... indefinitely. <3         

Do you offer returns or refunds?

This workshop is a digital product, so once you have experienced it, there is nothing to "return".

I have a no-refunds policy for this program. If you're not sure it will be right for you, email me and I'll help you decide.

I have a different question.

I'd be happy to chat about it! Email me at hi@suebrownmoore.com

My team and I answer most emails within 48 hours unless it's over a weekend or we're traveling. Please keep in mind that we are located in the Pacific time zone and keep daytime weekday work hours.

Sue pushes me to write better and better novels. She’s a fantastic editor. I don’t know how long it would’ve taken me to sharpen up my game without her, and I really don’t want to speculate on that either. Thank you, Sue!

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JS Harker

Urban Fantasy Romance writer

First, I want to say you are a phenomenal speaker and teacher. I watched your "Liar, Liar, Plot on Fire: A 5-question story diagnosis technique" webinar back in March and loved it. So of course I'm excited by the prospect of even more of your content.

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Coryanne Hicks

Ghostwriter / fiction writer

Testimonial from Annie Sherwood: "Before I did Sue's 20MHM workshop, I didn't know what my character's arc really looked like. Now, I do."
20 minutes of coaching.
Writing confidence that carries forward forever.

When you work through the guided exercises in the 20-Minute Hero Makeover, you'll...
Discover the true heart of your hero's journey (and focus on the simple framework that brings big emotion)
Craft a hero that readers can't help but root for, flaws and all (because perfect is boring but imperfect still needs to feel relatable)
Bring depth and authenticity to your story (without getting bogged down in complicated beats sheets or journey maps)
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